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Now it's a party!
Submission for the Super Saiyan jam on
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hey man, very good image! there are just a few point that pop out and with a few quick touches you can level it up even more.
1. the background colors are very cool and seem detached from the main character. you should shift it a bit to red.
2. no shadow under the rocks which is even more noticeable considering how well lit the main character is.
3. it seems like he doesn't have a mouth and i think we should be able to see his thumbs, especially since those things on his gloves look like backwards thumbs.
4. you can always try to add some "special effects" like rim light and motion blur and DOF. they're a bit of "cheap" but they do the job ^^
i hope you dont mind but here's a quick 5 min fix i did with color corrections and some blur: [link]
once again, its a solid work, man. im just commenting since it only needs a little nudge to become really awesome.
keep it up!
1. the background colors are very cool and seem detached from the main character. you should shift it a bit to red.
2. no shadow under the rocks which is even more noticeable considering how well lit the main character is.
3. it seems like he doesn't have a mouth and i think we should be able to see his thumbs, especially since those things on his gloves look like backwards thumbs.
4. you can always try to add some "special effects" like rim light and motion blur and DOF. they're a bit of "cheap" but they do the job ^^
i hope you dont mind but here's a quick 5 min fix i did with color corrections and some blur: [link]
once again, its a solid work, man. im just commenting since it only needs a little nudge to become really awesome.
keep it up!